I reworked the design in an effort to solve the problems that the first design had. The spacing between the 3content blocks is now even. Then there was the problem within the word "TRIAL", where the letters were causing some unbalanced effect due to the nature of their form. I've resolved that simply by turning the letters 90 degrees.
Another issue the previous design had was that the width of the letters wasn't consistent due to the serifs being added incorrectly. While the height of the word TRIAL is a little less than the height of the word ERROR, the composition feels a lot more balanced.
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